Enhanced Senses in Shadowed

The ability that has changed Paul Schuman’s life is easily described—he sums it up as:

What we have is the power to increase our five senses by connecting them to whatever we focus our attention on. That’s all it is.

but it has many uses and hidden pitfalls that, at the start of Shadowed, Paul has spent the last two years trying to understand.

 

“Opening” – how it works

Paul calls his power “Opening,” for how it opens him up to whatever sensation he focuses on.

That focus is the key to its nature, as he understands it. It operates by amplifying one specific perception out of many, allowing him to take in his sense of one specific thing much more powerfully than ordinary senses could.

At the start of Shadowed, Paul has spent the last two years struggling to control this power and also to make a secret living without anyone knowing about it. He can Open with a thought, while standing or walking, and give no outward sign that his attention is elsewhere. (If its weakness hasn’t triggered; see below.)

 

Opening Sight

Paul can increase the precision of his sight and the degree of distance and dim light he can see in. This appears to him like a form of tunnel vision; if he searches a dark street for a car of a specific color, he sees the colors of each car he looks at “jumping out at him” in the darkness until he finds the one he needs. Within those limits, his sight can be better than most binoculars, night vision glasses, or magnifying glasses. (Since it’s his own senses that are enhanced, he can’t see behind an object or where there’s no light at all.)

A technique he sometimes uses is to position himself where an object has a tiny reflection in a patch of glass. By Opening, Paul can then see that image clearly without revealing that he’s watching his target.

 

Opening Hearing

Paul has found that his hearing can be the easiest sense to use. This is simply because he doesn’t need extra study to understand a whispered secret or the footsteps of a guard approaching from the next floor, once he spots them, and because he doesn’t need to look toward someone to hear them. Opening’s use of focus makes Paul a master of “parabolic” listening over distance; in an otherwise quiet environment he can follow a whisper from more than a hundred feet away. On the other hand, complex conditions can be worse than distance; in one chapter he struggles to hear across the street, when two glass windows and busy traffic all run between him and his target.

Since he’s still limited to sounds his ears can still perceive, he can’t catch ultrasonic or other exotic sounds. But by focusing closely, Paul can spot electronic devices (such as burglar alarms) by hearing how the faint electric hum sounds more complex than it is through ordinary wires.

 

Opening Touch

Touch is a challenging sense to enhance. Paul can best use it by improving his precision with specific tasks he can practice; for instance he can learn to pick a lock quickly if he has a sample to work on (which he usually does). Enhanced touch doesn’t make him stronger or faster, but it can sometimes make a particular movement more efficient, if nothing interferes with it.

 

Opening Smell

Paul tries to avoid enhancing scents. In theory his nose could pick out a smell better than many animals, but he’s had trouble recognizing or remembering scents when he catches them, since (like most people) he had almost no practice analyzing them before his power appeared. Smell can also be the most overwhelming sense since it triggers memory directly.

 

Opening Taste

Like smell, taste is a sense Paul doesn’t have enough experience in deliberately using, enhanced or not. Paul uses taste mostly as a reward for himself, savoring the best foods he can afford. A fresh-baked roll can be a banquet to him, although too often he has to make do with stale food and fight to keep his sense from Opening.

 

A Note about Reading People

Paul’s senses can be awkward in focusing too intimately on other people. He knows he should be able to read people’s emotions and spot deception easily through tiny expressions and changes in voice, but he tends to shy away trying from it. Since he has had to learn to ignore most of the sensations of his own body, focusing too closely on others can be disorienting.

 

The Other Side of the Gift

Since Opening is triggered by his will, Paul’s senses are no better than average when he’s not using it. He can overlook signs or clues as easily as anyone else when he isn’t paying attention, and he can be surprised normally. Since he lives in hiding and in fear of being found out, he’s more likely to keep his guard up than many people, but this is more about attitude and having that extra awareness available if he needs it.

Also, the effect can be too available: it can be activated not only by full concentration, but sometimes by simply putting his attention on a thing. Paul can be intrigued by a sight or sound (or worse, caught up in a pain) and suddenly find he’s slipped into a trance and lost a minute or longer in taking it in. Much of his training in the two years before Shadowed begins was learning to control that effect.

As a result, Paul often uses his power by shifting rapidly from one focus to another, and never lingering on any one perception for long. By moving his attention around, combined with practice, Paul can usually keep himself under control.

 

The Source?

After years of searching, Paul still has no answer for where the power came from. His last memory was visiting a friend in a hospital, but nothing he can find connects the doctors to anything suspicious. His family history is just as ordinary.

But as Shadowed begins… could he have given that power to someone else?

 

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Star Wars: Is there a Fast Lane to the Force?

It’s New Year’s Eve tonight. I could lay out my thoughts about what I’ve done and what I haven’t done this year, and my vows to be more of the kind of writer I need to be.

Or I could talk about Star Wars.

 

I’ve Got a Good Feeling About This, Luke….

As Han made a point of saying, “It’s all true.” The Force Awakens really is a solid return to that galaxy we visited a long time ago, and it pushes all the buttons it needs to. Lightsabers and stormtroopers, cute robots, and sheer adventure for the sake of liberty and a good ride. And you’ve probably heard it’s more a familiar return than a try at any new territory, and that’s true too.

(After all, would anyone really want a Star Wars movie to mess with the basics? Their strength has always been trusting the story’s simplicity, with just the right added wrinkles. And Lucas showed us what happens when someone thinks they can get too careless with it.)

One thing I’ve been saying for years is that everything with the brand on it since the original movies is simply fanfiction. It might be expertly done (Timothy Zahn writing books, or Genndy Tartakovsky applying his Samurai Jack animation magic), or with all kinds of claims to be canon. But everyone who claimed their own story actually connected to that core always struck me as fooling themselves.

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Until now. We finally have a real sign that the magic is starting up again, that the new journey’s going to be worth taking—and I think the whole world’s been surprised to see how much we want to go there together. Credit J.J. Abrams (once again), along with the marvelous Daisy Ridley, Harrison Ford himself, and all the rest for making it possible.

 

Rey’s a Marvel – not a DC

One thing does stick in my mind watching the Awakening. One often-forgotten gem about the original trilogy was how slowly its “chosen hero” grew into his role. In the first movie Luke only got his lightsaber out for one round of training (and for that much more iconic poster), and spent most of his time being led along by Ben, Han, or Leia until the Force helps him make that one climactic shot. A couple years later, it’s still all he can do to summon his dropped saber, and Yoda’s training doesn’t entirely change that. It made the Force seem more a real part of the Star Wars universe, that truly understanding it might take a lifetime.

But Rey… for her, “potential Jedi” means working the Mind Trick, seeing visions, and winning duels within a day of discovering her power. Hmm.

The easy answer is that it’s simply to put the action at a faster pace. Let us see the new hero jump up to her flashier level in the one movie, instead of trying to hold our interest with mostly-human tricks all te way through. It gave us a good battle and all, but as a pacing decision I kind of miss the orginal New Hope‘s humility there.

Or there might be other reasons for it.

To go a little off-track, it reminds me of other points we can see, in some of the comic book achetypes:

DC Comics made its name with heroes like Superman, Batman and Wonder Woman that had a destiny for most of their lives. They’ve grown up trying to control or learn what’s going to make them unique, and they rarely pretend they wanted to be anything else. Or consider Tarzan, King Arthur, Sherlock Holmes… or Luke’s own feeling trapped on that farm and his slow, earnest (if delayed) growth into a hero once he got his chance.

Marvel came of age during the “atomic scare” 60s, but I think there’s more than that to the early Marvel attitude. Once those heroes get their powers (a saying you can’t even use for the Superman types), the Thing only wants to be human again, the Hulk is his own and everyone else’s worst enemy, Spider-Man is even more of a misfit than Peter Parker, and the X-Men find their genes have drafted them into a race war. The more suddenly change comes with a radioactive spider bite—or a vampire bite, or a computer file full of spies’ bytes—the more a reluctant hero can think the rest of his life bites too.

(Irony check: it was mostly those “bitten” heroes that Marvel made famous enough to sell off the movie rights to, so they were left with their more DC-like lifelong warriors and inventors to launch the Avengers universe. Meanwhile DC’s TV spotlight is now on their lightning-charged Everyman the Flash…)

They’re both fine ways to set up character and abilities, of course.

A hero who was human yesterday and never forgets it stays closer to the reader’s experience, plus it makes the most of those wild scenes where he first finds himself trying to control his new gifts. I’ve written that myself; The High Road is all about picking up a magic talisman and realizing how much you can suddenly do, and what a target you might be.

On the other hand, Shadowed let me start Paul as someone who’s had years to get used to his ability—if not all the history behind it. Slower-growing heroes like him and Luke can seem more organic, though not many modern action movies take the time to follow that the way A New Hope did. Then again, that side of his arc now seems more like a mainstream military or sports story, where the team and the mission get more attention than the new hero who’s earning his place there.

Rey doesn’t do that. But just what this means, we don’t know yet.

The very first Star Wars mention of the Force was Ben saying it “was strong in” a Jedi. I wonder, does that mean some Jedi really are just that much more gifted than others, more than Luke or Vader ever were? Could be.

And does it mean Rey’s going to find herself in over her head as fast as some of those other hurried, harried heroes? Just how strong is she, and how much will she have to cope with soon? Since Force Awakens was a clear parallel to A New Hope, that’s an ominous sign for how dark the next movie might turn.

Or it might just mean that Rey was already more confident and able to look after herself than young Luke. Maybe she’d been using the Force a little over the years already (say a bit of persuasion to keep those oasis thugs away?), and just needed Han to tell her it was real. She might already have been closer to her Jedi potential than she knew.

Only time, and the next movie, will tell. But I can’t wait to see Daisy Ridley do it.

 

(I’ve written a bit about Star Wars before, as a guest in Janice Hardy’s blog. That time it was about Luke on the farm, as an example of how a writer can keep the “oridinary moments” interesting—call that a study in making the most of whatever destiny was there at the moment, before the Force and the Stormtroopers kick the door down: http://blog.janicehardy.com/2014/09/your-scene-needs-problem.html.)

 

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